SerooChann Posted March 22, 2018 Report Share Posted March 22, 2018 A vast and delightful kingdom there was in the region of "Luminas Ara" which means the "Bright Fire" in the Drago tongue who were once extinct but came back after a decisive battle in "Levandor", the field of the cold mountains. But that's another story. Our story is of a rich community that are kind to anyone and a king that opens his great city to any person who wants to come in, whether for business or fun. The king offers a home to any person who kindly "helps" the kingdom itself by any means whether by money or even opening a shop. It is a lively place of cheers and joys. A man of great strength and physique knocked on the kingdom's gates and walked amongst them, he was not met in smiles but with fears and stones. He fled into one the "Trusty Beard" bar that was near the gate and met the "Red Beard", a big friendly man with a wide smile. He met the man with comfort and a free Ale for he saw him tired and devastated but he soon noticed ruckus behind him. He looked out the windows and calmed the people down, he could not hear anything but "monster" and "abomination" with many other foul words being yelled among the crowd, he was concerned. He looked back and he realized what they were talking about. He finally saw the man's face, it was mostly burned and looked awful, the only thing intact was his left green eyes. He stood there awed and disappointed but not because of the "monster" in front of him but he was disappointed by the people he lived and laughed with for many years. He went out and talked to them and told them how shameful it is for the kind people of this kingdom for what they're doing but soon he was met with stones and screams for standing with the monstrosity that is of the burned man. He went back and closed his doors and talked to the poor person. "My name is Thanilias" said the burned man, they talked for a while and befriended each other. Soon the king and the king's men came in chariots and spears. Red Beard went out and talked to the king but was instead struck with a spear to his chest. He told Thanilias to run away and take his precious one with him. He did not understand what he meant but he ran away to the back, while he did, he saw a little child in his sleeping clothes, about 5 years old, he was an elf. The little boy brushing his eyes, he just woke up. Thanilias couldn't explain but quickly carried the boy who soon cried and screamed for his "tata". They managed to escape out of the kingdom and they travelled on foot for days and days until they found themselves inside a shiny rocky cave. It was a marvellous cave of wonders and many different gems. They soon found others in the cave who were also "deformed" in their own ways. And from this day on, he would gather all unwanted people who were thrown away and exiled to help them and soon help others, but problems arose and conflict was between them. But that's a tale that we shall not dwell into for it is long and treacherous. My only purpose is to tell you how the "Exiled" started and here they are. The archetype is different from all the Heroes, for they do not rely on fusion but entirely on Xyz Monsters and Level/Rank changing. Except one, the related fusion monster card which is "different". Enjoy. Please some feedback for I feel some are broken and op. [spoiler=Main Monsters] [spoiler=Exiled HERO Bloodlam] Once per turn: You can send 1 "HERO" monster with a Level higher or lower than this card from your Deck to your GY; this card's Level becomes the Level of the sent monster until the End Phase. Once, if this card's Level becomes 7 or higher: You can add 1 "Exiled" card from your Deck to your hand. This card cannot be used as an Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a "HERO" or a Warrior-Type Xyz Monster. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Florencia] If you control this face-up card on the field: You can target 1 other face-up monster on the field with a Level higher or lower than this card; this card's Level becomes that card's Level or vice-versa, until the End Phase. If this card battles with a monster that has the same Level as this card: Banish that monster before damage calculation. You can activate each effect of "Exiled HERO Florencia" once per turn. [spoiler= Exiled HERO Noble] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Can be Special Summoned (from your hand) to your side of the field while you control 2 or more face-up "HERO" monsters of the same Level. Other face-up "HERO" monsters you control gain 100 ATK for every face-up "HERO" monster you control. Once per turn, if a card effect is activated that destroys a monster(s) on the field: You can target 1 face-up "HERO" monster you control and then increase or decrease the Level or the Rank of that target by 1; Negate the activation of that card's effect and destroy it. You cannot change the Level or Rank of a monster that was already targeted by this card's effect until your second Standby Phase after it was targeted. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Elfilia] If the Level/Rank of a face-up monster you control changes: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) to your side of the field. If Special Summoned this way: You can Increase or Decrease the Level/Rank of 1 face-up monster on the field by 1 or 2. Once per turn, you can target 1 other face-up monster on the field: If its Level is equal or higher than this card's Level; banish it and then inflict damage to your opponent's LP equal to the destroyed monster's ATK. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Warmongrel] Can only be Special Summoned(from your hand or GY) by decreasing the Rank of 1 face-up "Exiled HERO" Xyz monster you control by 3. You can also tribute a Rank 3 "Exiled HERO" Xyz Monster instead, if you do: Inflict damage to your LP equal to the tributed Xyz Monster's ATK. While this card is face-up on the field, during your Battle Phase: If a face-up "HERO" monster you control attacks a monster with a Level/Rank equal to or lower than its own Level/Rank; your opponent cannot activate card effects until the end of the damage step. Once per turn: You can Increase or Decrease the Level/Rank of 1 face-up monster on the field. If this card is sent to the GY from the field: Banish it. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Arachna] If you control a face-up "HERO" monster whose current Level is not its original Level: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn, during either player's Battle Phases: Target 1 other face-up "HERO" monster on the field; Increase or Decrease the Level/Rank of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls equal to the target's Level/ Rank. If this card battles: Increase this card's ATK equal to difference of the Level of this card and the card its battling x100 until the end of the damage step. You can only control 1 "Exiled HERO Arachna" at a time. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Larkin] Once per turn: You can equip this face-up card you control to a face-up monster your opponent controls and as long as this card is equipped to a monster; "Exiled" monsters on the field gain ATK equal to the equipped monster's Level/Rank x100. If the equipped monster is destroyed: Special Summon this card to your side of the field instead of sending it to the GY; distribute Levels on the field up to the Level of the destroyed monster. You cannot Xyz Summon the turn this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, except the Xyz Summon of "HERO" monsters. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Cicilia] If a monster effect activates while you control a face-up "HERO" monster whose Level/Rank is changed (Quick Effect): You can reveal this card in your hand and send it to your GY; negate that monster's effect and destroy it. If a monster effect activates and this card is in your GY (Quick Effect): You can negate that monster's effect until the End Phase; Special Summon this card from your GY, then you can Increase or Decrease the Level/Rank of 1 face-up monster on the field by 1. You can only activate 1 "Exiled HERO Cicilia" effect per turn and only once that turn. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Miracle] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Can only be Special Summoned (from your hand or GY) by tributing 2 face-up "HERO" monsters you control whose Levels or Ranks are changed. If Special Summoned from your GY: Discard 2 cards from your hand, otherwise banish this card. Face-up monsters you control cannot be removed from the field by card effects your opponent controls. Once per turn: If this card destroys a monster by battle, you can activate 1 of the following effects: ●Special Summon (from your hand or GY) a monster whose Level/Rank is equal to or lower than the Level/Rank of the destroyed monster. ●Distribute Levels/Ranks on face-up monsters on the field up to the destroyed monster's Level/Rank. ●Once, if the destroyed monster's Level/Rank is not its original Level/Rank when it was destroyed: Draw cards equal to the difference (max .3) [spoiler=Exiled HERO Rifilia] Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field whose Level not its original Level; return it to its owner respective owner's hand and then inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's LP. This card cannot attack the turn this effect activated. Once: If the Level/Rank of a face-up monster on the field changes; You can Special Summon this card (from your hand or GY) to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Malichange] Once per turn: If this card is Summoned to your side of the field; you can Special Summon 1 "HERO" monster (from your hand or GY) to your side of the field and have this card's Level become that card's Level. A Level 5 or higher monster Special Summoned by this card's effect have their effects negated and their ATK and DEF become 0. You can only use this card as an Xyz Material for the Xyz Summon of a "HERO" monster. [spoiler=Extra Deck Monsters] [spoiler=Exiled HERO Supplementor] 2 "HERO" monsters with the same LevelThis card's Rank is equal to the same Levels of the Xyz Materials used to Xyz Summon this card +1. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to its rank x500 (max. 3500). Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card (Quick Effect); Until the End Phase, either increase the ATK of 1 face-up "HERO" monster you control by 1000 or increase the ATK of all other face-up HERO monsters you control by 500. If this card has no Xyz Materials: You can decrease this card's rank by 2; attach 1 "HERO" monster as an Xyz Material to this card from your GY. If this card's Rank is changed by its own effect: That Rank becomes its original Rank. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Mystindigo]2 Level 7 "Exiled HERO" monstersIf this card is Xyz Summoned: You can return 1 "HERO" monster from your hand to your Deck; Set 1 Spell or Trap Card directly from your Deck to your field (cannot be activated the turn it was Set). Once per turn, if a Spell Card is activated: You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card; Negate the activation of that card and return it to the Deck, then you can Set 1 Spell or Trap Card from your GY to your field. Once, if this card has no Xyz Materials; you can return 2 Set Spell or Trap cards you control to your Deck; Attach 1 "HERO" monster (from your hand or GY) to this card as an Xyz Material. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Soarijia] 2 Level 3 "HERO" monstersIf this card has Xyz Materials at the start of the Battle Phase: This card can attack twice during that Battle Phase. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase: You can target 1 other face-up HERO monster you control, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; until the end of this Battle Phase, Increase this card's ATK equal to the target's Level x100 or increase this card's ATK equal to the target's Rank x150 if the target is an Xyz Monster. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Grenwing] 2 Level 1 "HERO" monstersYou can also Xyz Summon this card from your Extra Deck with no Xyz Materials attached to it if you control a face-up "Exiled HERO" Xyz Monster with Xyz Materials attached to it. If Xyz Summoned this way: Detach 1 Xyz Material from 1 Xyz Monster on the field; attach it to this card as an Xyz Material, otherwise destroy this card. Once per turn, if the Level/Rank of a face-up "HERO" monster you control changes: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; draw cards equal to the difference before and after the change (max. 2) and then, Increase this card's Rank up to the amount of cards you drew. If this card has no Xyz Materials: You can Xyz Summon an "Exiled HERO" Xyz Monster with 1 Rank higher than this card from the Extra Deck using this card as an Xyz Material. You can only control 1 "Exiled HERO Grenwing" at a time and you can only Xyz Summon it by its own effect once per turn. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Skulltorch] 2 Level 4 Warrior-Type monstersYou can also Xyz Summon this card using 2 Level 4 "HERO" monsters as Xyz Materials. If the Level/Rank of a face-up monster on the field changes: If this card has a "HERO" monster as an Xyz Material; inflict damage to your opponent's LP equal to the change x200. If this card battles with a monster that has a Level: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy that monster before damage calculation, and then inflict damage to your opponent's LP equal to its Level x100. You can only activate 1 "Exiled HERO Skulltorch" effect per turn and only once that turn. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Monarchariot] 2 Level 8 "HERO" monstersYou can also Xyz Summon this card using an "Exiled HERO" Xyz Monster you control whose Rank is not its original Rank, except "Exiled HERO Monarchariot". (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If Xyz Summoned this way: This card's effect is negated until the End Phase of this turn. As long as this face-up card on the field has Xyz Materials attached to it: Face-up monsters your opponent controls lose ATK and DEF equal to their Levels/Rank x100 (max. 1000). Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Activate 1 of the following effects; ●Target 1 face-up monster on the field whose current Level/Rank is changed from its original Level/Rank: Return cards on the field to their respective owner's hands equal to the difference (max. 2). ●Change all face-up monsters your opponent controls whose Levels/Ranks is changed from their original Levels/Ranks to face-down Defense Position. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Masterman] 2 or more Level 5 monsters1 of the Xyz Materials must be a monster whose Level is not its original Level when Xyz Summoning this card. If this card is Xyz Summoned: If 1 of the Xyz Materials attached to this card is a "HERO" monster; destroy cards on the field up to the number of Xyz Materials attached to this card, and then inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's LP for each card destroyed. Once per turn, if you control this face-up card and your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card (Quick Effect): You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and then target 1 face-up monster you control; negate the activation and destroy that card, then deal damage to your opponent's LP equal to the target's Level/Rank x100. [spoiler=Exiled HERO Fate] 2 Level 4 "HERO" monstersIf this card attacks: Your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards until the end of the damage step. Once per turn, you can decrease the Level/Rank of 1 face-up "Exiled" monster you control by 2: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; return up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards on the field to their respective owner's hands. If this card's effect decreases the Level/Rank of a face-up monster you control to 1: Return that card to your hand. [spoiler=Spell and Trap Cards] [spoiler=Portal of the Exiled] Once per turn: If the Level/Rank of a face-up monster you control is changed; You can Special Summon 1 "Exiled HERO" monster from your hand with a Level equal or lower than the changed monster's current Level/Rank. If a face-up Xyz Monster you control would be destroyed by a card effect your opponent controls: You can send this face-up card instead to your GY. Reveal 1 "Exiled HERO" monster from your hand during each of your Standby Phase or banish this card. You can only control 1 "Portal of the Exiled" at a time. [spoiler=Changing of the Exiled] Target 1 monster in your hand or GY: Reveal it to your opponent; the Level/Rank of 1 face-up monster on the field becomes the target's Level/Rank until the End Phase. [spoiler=Reward of the Exiled] Once per turn: If the Level/Rank of a face-up monster on the field changes; draw 1 card. If this card is sent to the GY: Draw 1 card. During each of your Standby Phases, if there is no face-up monster on the field whose Level/Rank is not its original Level/Rank: Banish this face-up card on the field. You can only control 1 "Reward of the Exiled" at a time. [spoiler=Related Fusion Monster] 4 "HERO" monsters whose Levels/Ranks are changed2 of the Fusion Materials used to Fusion Summon this card must be Xyz Monsters. Can only be Fusion Summoned by tributing the above cards from your side of the field (must be face-up) and cannot be Summoned by other ways. This card's Fusion Summon cannot be negated. This card cannot be removed from the field by card effects and its effect cannot be negated. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: If this card would be destroyed by battle; it is not. If this card destroys a monster by battle: Add half the Level of the destroyed monster to this card. If this card's Level reaches 12 by its own effect: You win the Duel. [spoiler=Link Monsters] 1 "HERO" monsterOnce per turn: You can make this card point to another Monster Zone until the End Phase. Once per turn: You can Increase or Decrease the Level/Rank of a monster this card points to by 1, then you can Special Summon 1 "Exiled HERO" monster from your hand (its effect is negated and its ATK and DEF become 0) and make its Level equal to the monster this card points to. If you do, you cannot Special Summon monsters except "Exiled" monsters this turn. 2 "HERO" monstersIf this card is Link Summoned: You can Special Summon 1 "Exiled HERO" monster from your hand or GY to a Monster Zone this card points to. If this card's effect Special Summons a monster from the GY, that monster's ATK and DEF become 0. Once per turn: You can increase this card's ATK equal to a monster's Level/Rank x100 that this card points to until your opponent's next End Phase. 3+ "HERO" monsters1 of the Link Materials must have a Level/Rank that is not its original Level/Rank. If this card is Link Summoned: Draw cards equal to the face-up monsters on the field this card points to (max. 2). This card gains 200 ATK for each "HERO" monster it points to. Once per turn, If the Level/Rank of a monster this card points to changes, you can activate 1 of the following effects: *Randomly discard up to 2 cards from your opponent's hand. *Destroy 1 card on the field. *Special Summon 1 "HERO" monster (from your hand) equal to the difference before and after the change in Level to a zone this card points to. After a lot of edits, I have no idea why the Extra Deck monsters effects are not inside the spoiler and only the img even though the structure is exactly the same as the main monsters and I have triple checked everything. It's good but for some weird reason the image is inside the spoiler without the effect. Even the Spell and Trap card is inside the EXTRA DECK section even though I ended the extra deck spoiler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SerooChann Posted March 24, 2018 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2018 Bumperinos. Updated. Added 3 Link monsters, which were my first attempt at making Link Monsters and I didn't even watch yugioh vrains episode 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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