Looks good enough to me, but could be better. The first effect scares away Links, or translates to 1 less attack on your board. It would be among the few Normal Summonable Quick Effect disruptors. The closest is Whip Snake, which AFAIK did was teched in PPals as an optional extra layer of disruption. This may not get as much support as a PPal, but it has the pluses of hitting Links and being a Warrior, so good old ROTA comes in.
As for how it can better, if you lower its Level by a bit then it becomes more accessible through Isolde, and if on top of that you make it a Tuner, Needlefiber would be able to grab it.
There is Gaap too to keep monsters in Attack Position, although I don't know if they would be bounced, or if the monsters are successfully switched into Defense Position, then changed back again to Attack Position due to Orders/Gaap. I would think it's the latter since Wind-Up Rat can still use its effect under Gaap's effect.
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