[TRM] S A V E U S

[Tormented]

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[Dad]

I like the grungy, steampunk feel of this.  It's really cool.

[Simping For Hina]

The blending around the help is terrible. This is pretty basic smudging, almost monotone. You seem to use the render to create most of the work, but some brushing into smudge work would probably be better. Lighting is cool but has no source. I like this piece, but it seems like you're just dipping your toes into the water without trying to make this something. It really doesn't do anything more than show you know how to put the smudge tool on and move your mouse around.

Get back to having a reason and purpose of why you're making the piece, even if that is just a concept. Flush out the concept rather than half-ass most of the work. This is bland.

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

The colors are really nice. It does feel slightly unfinished or styled somewhat outdated as not much is happening.