peacock.

[Smear]

[Thar]

no hard feelings, m8

 

This was my first choice, cause I really like how it blends together, though the glow around the render made it kinda eh for me at a second glance. I do like the subtlety of the foreground, though. Overall the piece is a nice and simple gem.

[Catman25]

I really like the flow and depth here. I think another instance of the c4d in the mid-back ground would be cool, or maybe someway to get some of that peacock feather color and texture in the mid-fore ground. Feels like it just needs a couple more  layers to make the depth nice and cohesive.

 

Lighting is a tad artificial, but gives it a nice atmosphere and I think it's a big contributor to your depth. playing with the the pockets of

empty spaces/shadows and maybe upping the contrast a bit might help, which would prob make the colors pop a bit more as well.

 

Overall really liked this one, man

[Simping For Hina]

I really like the flow and depth here. I think another instance of the c4d in the mid-back ground would be cool, or maybe someway to get some of that peacock feather color and texture in the mid-fore ground. Feels like it just needs a couple more  layers to make the depth nice and cohesive.

 

Lighting is a tad artificial, but gives it a nice atmosphere and I think it's a big contributor to your depth. playing with the the pockets of

empty spaces/shadows and maybe upping the contrast a bit might help, which would prob make the colors pop a bit more as well.

 

Overall really liked this one, man

i am in love with you

 

and the way you cnc posts is the most beautiful thing i have seen.

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

Contrary to what seems to be popular opinion, I'm not a fan of this one. You've utilized/created some interesting shapes, but IMO it would benefit to review some fundamentals.

 

The glow around the focal looks artificial and it would possibly improve blending to remove it. The lighting could use some work, particularly with the foreground. There's a shape/c4d in front of the girl which values contradict the implied lighting on her. Lastly the shadows need to be more consistent; currently the girl has shadows affected by a saturated purple while the environment (which appears to be mostly shadow values) directly around her is mostly unsaturated blues.  

[Madsen]

Pretty cool but you should expand your range of colors and experiment with saturation and contrast to make your sheet pop