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I really don't like writing appearances in an app...

 

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I really don't like writing appearances in an app...

 

Shatter

 

A very interesting character, especially for a C-class. I will need the approximate range on her power, but otherwise this is airtight! I think you'll be taking the last spot!

 

Got a character consept, whatever.

The Doctor is IN

 

 

 

still a WIP, let me know if there's anything it needs

The Nightmare Hero

 

 

These two characters are quiet similar, both being mentalists of some kind. Toyo's is more fleshed out, so I am more inclined to accept Linda. I'll be placing this one in reserve, should I want to add characters to the story. 

 

 

MIDAS
 
I like how zany Midas is, especially the Pay to Win ability. Unfortunately, you have some stiff competition. This one will also be on reserve when a new character needs to be added.

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OFFICIAL HOST ANNOUNCEMENT

 

Acceptance will now be for the waitlist/character reserve.

 

The RP will be beginning soonTM.


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Honestly the range is something I struggle with...I almost just want to say "within sight" but in some situations that'd be much too much


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Honestly the range is something I struggle with...I almost just want to say "within sight" but in some situations that'd be much too much

 

If you're struggling to come up with an exact range, perhaps include her best feat so far. Maybe as she improves she can do better than that.


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If you're struggling to come up with an exact range, perhaps include her best feat so far. Maybe as she improves she can do better than that.

Mostly I'm bad at imagining distances for this kind of thing but I don't imagine it's super long range. So around....50-100 feet?


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So what's been going on with this RP? I suppose things are happening on Discord maybe?

 

I kinda joined at first figuring it would be a smaller RP, I think I'm going to drop so don't wait on me.


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@Aix: yea, most of the planning is on the Discord. I am just about ready to post the first IC post. You needn't drop though, I have a feeling that I may be able to handle more characters.


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IC Thread Posted.


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@Acastand This is pretty good, but I'm going to need more details on those shields, as I'm not sure if I have the full image of what you're going for. Are these shields visible? Do they absorb force, redirect it, or do they transfer it to Artemis as a normal shield would work? You mentioned a sword, how powerful is that sword? What is the range of her creation abilities?

 

I would also suggest breaking down her powers section into point form, with each point being a separate aspect of her power for easier reading.


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I would also suggest breaking down her powers section into point form, with each point being a separate aspect of her power for easier reading.

I'm not sure how exactly I break her powers down to "point form" @Otaku-sama


 

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I'm not sure how exactly I break her powers down to "point form" @Otaku-sama

Otaku-sama means take the powers and list them with bullet points, like so:

 

  • power 1
  • power 2
  • power 3

Although you may want to make it more detailed than that.


"Semper Ad Meliora"

Always On To Greater Things


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Don't Let The Bastards Grind You Down


"Si Vis Pacem, Para Bellum"

If You Want Peace, Prepare For War


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Truth Never Dies


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Family Above All


"Non Desistas, Non Exieris"

Never Give Up, Never Surrender


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She only has one power. I will try to rephrase it in my next edit.


 

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