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I really don't like writing appearances in an app...

 

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I really don't like writing appearances in an app...

 

Shatter

 

A very interesting character, especially for a C-class. I will need the approximate range on her power, but otherwise this is airtight! I think you'll be taking the last spot!

 

Got a character consept, whatever.

The Doctor is IN

 

 

 

still a WIP, let me know if there's anything it needs

The Nightmare Hero

 

 

These two characters are quiet similar, both being mentalists of some kind. Toyo's is more fleshed out, so I am more inclined to accept Linda. I'll be placing this one in reserve, should I want to add characters to the story. 

 

 

MIDAS
 
I like how zany Midas is, especially the Pay to Win ability. Unfortunately, you have some stiff competition. This one will also be on reserve when a new character needs to be added.

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OFFICIAL HOST ANNOUNCEMENT

 

Acceptance will now be for the waitlist/character reserve.

 

The RP will be beginning soonTM.


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Honestly the range is something I struggle with...I almost just want to say "within sight" but in some situations that'd be much too much


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Honestly the range is something I struggle with...I almost just want to say "within sight" but in some situations that'd be much too much

 

If you're struggling to come up with an exact range, perhaps include her best feat so far. Maybe as she improves she can do better than that.


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If you're struggling to come up with an exact range, perhaps include her best feat so far. Maybe as she improves she can do better than that.

Mostly I'm bad at imagining distances for this kind of thing but I don't imagine it's super long range. So around....50-100 feet?


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So what's been going on with this RP? I suppose things are happening on Discord maybe?

 

I kinda joined at first figuring it would be a smaller RP, I think I'm going to drop so don't wait on me.


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@Aix: yea, most of the planning is on the Discord. I am just about ready to post the first IC post. You needn't drop though, I have a feeling that I may be able to handle more characters.


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IC Thread Posted.


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@Acastand This is pretty good, but I'm going to need more details on those shields, as I'm not sure if I have the full image of what you're going for. Are these shields visible? Do they absorb force, redirect it, or do they transfer it to Artemis as a normal shield would work? You mentioned a sword, how powerful is that sword? What is the range of her creation abilities?

 

I would also suggest breaking down her powers section into point form, with each point being a separate aspect of her power for easier reading.


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I would also suggest breaking down her powers section into point form, with each point being a separate aspect of her power for easier reading.

I'm not sure how exactly I break her powers down to "point form" @Otaku-sama


 

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I'm not sure how exactly I break her powers down to "point form" @Otaku-sama

Otaku-sama means take the powers and list them with bullet points, like so:

 

  • power 1
  • power 2
  • power 3

Although you may want to make it more detailed than that.


"Semper Ad Meliora"

Always On To Greater Things


"Illegitimis Non Carborundum"

Don't Let The Bastards Grind You Down


"Si Vis Pacem, Para Bellum"

If You Want Peace, Prepare For War


"Veritas Nunquam Perit"

Truth Never Dies


"Familia Ante Omnia"

Family Above All


"Non Desistas, Non Exieris"

Never Give Up, Never Surrender


"Atrox Melior Dulcissima Veritas Mendaciis"

The Bitter Truth Is Better Than The Sweetest Lies


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She only has one power. I will try to rephrase it in my next edit.


 

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Character Name: Artemis Francheska Ravenhart
Age: 19
Sex: Female
Appearance: Artemis wears a black, undesigned t-shirt with a small, black leather jacket. She stands around 5'7" and walks normally, usually with her hands in her jean pockets. She also wears black jeans and tennis shoes. She has black hair, violet eyes, and pale skin. She is skinny, with some muscle. Lastly, she wears black, leather, and sleeveless gloves with violet X's on the palms(for show). She has a violet X on her leather jacket, just below her left shoulder.

Personality: She is a quiet girl casually, though she does talk occasionally if she is talked to by someone. Otherwise, she usually does not enter a conversation on her own. When in battle, she usually stays quiet and defends the civilians first before going on the offensive. When on the offensive, she will a bit more talkative, usually saying slurs or making fun of the monster, getting it to attack more and defend less. She could care less about the money, instead of enjoying helping whoever she can. She does not attack unless another hero is with her, which she still mostly plays defensive, though shielding the hero instead of herself.

Powers: She is able to make small shields that extend from the palm of her hands. These shields are not limited to size, however, larger sizes lower the durability of the shield. A small, round shield can take about as much thirty trucks running into it, while a large wall about the size of a one-story wall can take two-thirds that. The shields can also take shape if she wished, however, it takes longer for these to open fully depending on the complexity or size. The small shield can open at around half a second. Typically she creates a small shield(radius of about a foot) for personal defense and usually forms a sword of her design for an offense, though she does not engage in combat unless she isn't alone. She is about as strong as a normal person and has the agility of a trained free runner. The shields appear as a translucent purple glass. If her shield were to break from an attack, the attack will be blocked, but she goes unconscious when that happens. The shield would deflect the attack away, except when it breaks, in which it absorbs the attack. The sword is about as strong as a regular sword, though she isn't very strong so it can only cut what any sword could

Class: B-Class

Background: Artemis was born and had a happy life from her childhood. In her teenage years, she discovered her powers. She became somewhat gothic, yet maintaining school grades and such. After graduating high school, she got a job as a cashier at a convenience store. She didn't really care and made as best of a living as she could. She saw Mumen Rider attempt to stop a crime on TV and decided to apply for the heroes association to make a living. After being accepted, she quit her job to join.

Ability Type: Mind
Stamina: 5
Intelligence: 7
Justice: 4
Endurance: 8
Power: 2
Popularity: 6
Effectiveness: 6

 

Fighting Ability: 3


 

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@Acastand This looks a lot better! I'll add you to the waitlist. We haven't quite reached the point where I can add more heroes in, but I'll make an announcement when it's time.

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