Solarice04 Posted February 23, 2019 Report Share Posted February 23, 2019 Decided to try my hand at the Venom Archetype and see what I could come up with. Take a gander at what I have so far. Monsters-------- Apostle of the Snake DeityLevel 4 Dark Reptile/EffectIf you control a "Venom Swamp", this card cannot be destroyed or banished by card effects. Once per turn, you may remove 1 Venom Counter on this card to select one Reptile monster you control; it gains 1000 ATK.0/1500------ Serpent Guard of the Snake DeityLevel 4 Dark Reptile/EffectIf you control a "Venom Swamp", this card cannot be destroyed or banished by card effects. Once per turn, you may remove a Venom Counter on this card to activate one of the following effects:-All other Level 4 or lower Reptile monsters you control cannot be targeted.-If a Monster you control would be destroyed by your opponents card effect, negate it and destroy that card.0/2000 ------Servant of the Snake DeityLevel 1 Dark Reptile/EffectIf you control a "Venom Swamp", this card cannot be destroyed or banished by card effects. Once per turn, you may remove 1 Venom Counter from this card; Draw 1 card.0/0--- Venom AdderLevel 4 Earth Reptile/EffectOnce per turn, you can place one Venom Counter on 1 monster your opponent controls. If you control no monsters, you may special summon this card from your hand.1600/1700--------- Venom RattlerLevel 4 Earth Reptile/EffectOnce per turn, you can place 2 Venom Counters on 1 monster your opponent controls. When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls that has a Venom Counter attached to it, randomly send one card in your opponent's hand to the graveyard.1900/1500--------- Venom ViperLevel 4 Earth Reptile/EffectOnce per turn, you can place one Venom Counter on 1 monster your opponent controls. While you control this card, the effects of monsters with Venom Counters are negated during the battle phase.1800/1600--------- Venom Lord - Constrictus The AnacondaLevel 4 Dark Reptile/Xyz2 Level 4 "Venom" monstersThis card gains 500 ATK for each Reptile-Type monster in your graveyard. If this card would be destroyed, special summon 2 Reptile-Type monsters from your graveyard in face-up attack position. During your main phase, you may detach 2 XYZ to remove Venom Counters (Max:10) from the field. Send a number of cards on the opponent's side of field equal to the number of Venom Counters removed to the deck and deal damage to the opponent's LP equal to the number of removed Venom Counters x 200.0/1800--------- Spells-------- Lost City of the Snake DeityField SpellTreat this cards name as "Venom Swamp". During each player's End Phase: Place 1 Venom Counter on each face-up monster, except "Venom" monsters. Monsters lose 500 ATK for each Venom Counter on them. Banish a monster if its ATK becomes 0 by this effect. Once per turn: You can target 1 of your banished "Venom" monsters; return it to the hand, and if you do, lose LP equal to its original Level x 100.---- Call of the Snake DeityQuick-Play SpellSelect a Reptile-monster in your hand or GY and either pay LP equal to the monster Level x 200 or remove Venom Counters on the field equal to the level of the selected monster and Special summon it to the field.---- Gift of the Snake DeityNormal SpellActivate by showing your opponent one "Venom" monster in your hand. Select one monster on the field with a Venom Counter(s). Remove all Venom counters on that card and gain 200 LP for every Venom Counter removed.---- Temple of the Snake DeityContinuous SpellOnce per turn you may add one card from your hand to your deck to search your deck or GY for a "Venom" or "Snake Deity" card and add it to your hand. If you control a "Venom Lord," "Vennominon the King of Poisonous Snakes," or "Vennominaga the Deity of Poisonous snakes," You may instead choose to pay 200 LP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dougtheloremaster Posted February 23, 2019 Report Share Posted February 23, 2019 Venom RattlerLevel 4 Earth Reptile/EffectOnce per turn, you can place 2 Venom Counters on 1 monster your opponent controls. When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls that has a Venom Counter attached to it, randomly send one card in your opponent's hand to the graveyard.1900/1500 this effect is far too strong. the way it is worded once per turn you are making your opponent neg 2 for free. my suggestion change the following portion"When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls that has a Venom Counter attached to it, randomly send one card in your opponent's hand to the graveyard." to say "When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls that has any Venom Counter attached to it, randomly send one card in your opponent's hand to the graveyard." 1900 atk breaks the no drawback cap we would normally see for level 4...suggestion 1800. not a big issue just something i noticed. This:Venom Lord - Constrictus The AnacondaLevel 4 Dark Reptile/Xyz2 Level 4 "Venom" monstersThis card gains 500 ATK for each Reptile-Type monster in your graveyard. If this card would be destroyed, special summon 2 Reptile-Type monsters from your graveyard in face-up attack position. During your main phase, you may detach 2 XYZ to remove Venom Counters (Max:10) from the field. Send a number of cards on the opponent's side of field equal to the number of Venom Counters removed to the deck and deal damage to the opponent's LP equal to the number of removed Venom Counters x 200.0/1800looks OP at a glance but honestly is a rather gorgeous card. I would 100% run that in a venomd eck. nice work! in fact aside the discard effect of rattlert I believe you have a very well balanced group here. the cost equals a risk but the gains are worth that potential risk. Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solarice04 Posted February 23, 2019 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2019 "When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls that has a Venom Counter attached to it, randomly send one card in your opponent's hand to the graveyard." "When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls that has any Venom Counter attached to it, randomly send one card in your opponent's hand to the graveyard." I don't get it. How would this new wording make the card less powerful? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dougtheloremaster Posted February 23, 2019 Report Share Posted February 23, 2019 I don't get it. How would this new wording make the card less powerful? in yugioh the card text specifies the mechanic and effect especially now that we have problem solving card text for instance "destroy all monsters on the field" does not target as it does not specify it, but "target and destroy all monsters" would cause dark hole to target not simply wipe the field. the difference between "a" and "any" is : "a" means one "any" means at all. The way your card is worded if "a counter" means it can be abused for "a" or rather each counter, "any" however would limit it to be activated once while those counters are active. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solarice04 Posted February 23, 2019 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2019 Huh. Okay, that makes sense. Okay, the new Venom Rattler would look like this: Venom RattlerLevel 4 Earth Reptile/EffectOnce per turn, you can place 2 Venom Counters on 1 monster your opponent controls. When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls that has any Venom Counter attached to it, randomly send one card in your opponent's hand to the graveyard.1800/1500 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dougtheloremaster Posted February 23, 2019 Report Share Posted February 23, 2019 Huh. Okay, that makes sense. Okay, the new Venom Rattler would look like this: Venom RattlerLevel 4 Earth Reptile/EffectOnce per turn, you can place 2 Venom Counters on 1 monster your opponent controls. When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls that has any Venom Counter attached to it, randomly send one card in your opponent's hand to the graveyard.1800/1500 If you make the actual cards I would love to see them. They really sound like they have some thought behind them and I'm sure the aesthetics will match as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solarice04 Posted February 25, 2019 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2019 If you make the actual cards I would love to see them. They really sound like they have some thought behind them and I'm sure the aesthetics will match as well.Sure, if I ever get around to it. Just don't expect them to be a masterpieces. Now then, I have some new cards for this Topic, but before I get to them I need to make a quick errata to one of the cards here. Venom Lord - Constrictus The AnacondaLevel 4 Dark Reptile/Xyz2 Level 4 "Venom" monstersThis card gains 500 ATK for each Reptile-Type monster in your graveyard. If this card would be destroyed, special summon 2 Reptile-Type monsters from your graveyard in face-up attack position. During your main phase, you may detach 2 XYZ to remove Venom Counters (Max:10) from the field. Send a number of cards on the opponent's side of field equal to the number of Venom Counters removed to the deck and deal damage to the opponent's LP equal to the number of removed Venom Counters x 200.0/1800 I had completely forgotten that Xyz monsters have Ranks, not Levels. So... Venom Lord - Constrictus The AnacondaRank 4 Dark Reptile/Xyz2 Level 4 "Venom" monstersThis card gains 500 ATK for each Reptile-Type monster in your graveyard. If this card would be destroyed, special summon 2 Reptile-Type monsters from your graveyard in face-up attack position. During your main phase, you may detach 2 XYZ to remove Venom Counters (Max:10) from the field. Send a number of cards on the opponent's side of field equal to the number of Venom Counters removed to the deck and deal damage to the opponent's LP equal to the number of removed Venom Counters x 200.0/1800 There we go. Now, on to the actual list of new cards: Monsters-------- Priest of the Snake DeityLevel 5 Dark Reptile/EffectIf "Venom Swamp" is on the field, this card cannot be Banished or Destroyed by Card Effects. When this card is summoned, select up to 3 monsters on the field and distribute 3 Venom Counters among them. Once per turn, You may remove 1 Venom Counter from this card to select one Reptile-Type monster you control; That monster is unaffected by all other card effects until the end phase.0/2000------ Venom SidewinderLevel 4 Earth Reptile/EffectOnce per turn, you can place one Venom Counter on 1 monster your opponent controls. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack. If this card destroys a monster with a Venom Counter by battle, it may attack once again in a row.1600/800------ Venom WarriorLevel 5 Dark Reptile/EffectWhen this card attacks a monster, add 1 Venom Counter to that monster before damage calculation. If you control a "Venom" or "Snake Deity" monster, you may Special summon this card from your hand.2100/1600------ Venom Lord - Shadow MambaRank 4 Dark Reptile/XYZ2 Level 4 "Venom monstersWhen this card destroys a monster by battle, add 1 Venom counter to all monsters on the field, except "Venom" Monsters. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon two Reptile-Type monsters to the field from your hand. During either player's turn, detach 2 cards from this monster and banish all monsters on your opponent's side of the field that have 3 or more Venom Counters. If you do, this monster cannot attack this turn.2200/800------ Venom Lord - Ophiuchus The Emperor CobraRank 5 Dark Reptile/XYZWhen this monster battles a monster your opponent controls, increase this monster's ATK by an amount equal to the number of Venom Counters on the opponent's monster x 200. Once per turn, you may detach 1 Xyz Material card from this monster; target a monster on your opponent's side of the field with a Venom Counter, change that monster's type to Reptile and take control of it until the end phase.2000/1200 Spells------ Rite of the Snake DeityNormal SpellTreat this cards name as "Rise of the Snake Deity". This card can only be activated if "Venominon the King of Poisonous Snakes" and 3 "Venom Lord" cards are in your graveyard. Sacrifice monsters from your hand or field whose total levels equals 10 or more and Special Summon "Vennominaga the Deity of Poisonous Snakes" to the field.------- Altar of the Snake DeityNormal SpellSacrifice one Reptile-Type monster Level 5 or higher from your hand or field to activate one of the following effects until the Standby phase of your next turn: -Your opponent cannot Special Summon monsters Level 5 or higher. -Your opponent cannot set cards in face-down defence position.-All Face-up Reptile-type monsters you control can inflict piercing damage.You can only activate 1 "Altar of the Snake Deity" per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solarice04 Posted March 3, 2019 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2019 Alright, here are my last few cards for this Topic. What do you think? Monsters------------ Venom Lord - Vennonom, The Prince of Poisonous SnakesLevel 5 Dark Reptile/EffectIf you control a Reptile-Type monster Level 5 or higher or a "Venom Lord" monster, you may special summon this card from your hand. When this card is summoned, select one monster on the field with Poison Counters; this card gains 500 ATK for every Poison Counter on that card. Once per turn, you may discard one card from your hand, add 1 Poison Counter to every monster on the field except "Venom" monsters.?/1900------ Venom Lord - Vennomina, The Queen of Poisonous SnakesLevel 6 Dark Reptile/EffectIf you control another "Venom Lord" monster with a different name, "Vennominon, The King of Poisonous Snakes" or "Venominaga, the Deity of Poisonous Snakes," You may special summon this card from your hand. This card gains 600 ATK for each Reptile-Type monster on the field. Once, on either players turn, you may remove 2 Venom Counters on the field to negate the effect of a magic card and destroy it.?/2100------ Traps----- Sacred Serpents of the Snake DeityCounter TrapThis card can only be activated if you control a "Venom Lord" XYZ monster. Discard two cards from your hand to activate the following effects once for each "Venom Lord" XYZ monster with a different name you control:"Venom Lord - Shadow Mamba": Add 1 Venom Counter to all monsters on the field except "Venom Monsters."Venom Lord - Constrictus the Anaconda": Remove Venom Counters (Max: 5) on the field, deal damage to the opponent equal to the number of Venom Counters removed times 500"Venom Lord - Ophiuchus the Emperor Cobra": Target a monsters on the opponent's side of the field with two or more Venom Counters, change their typing to Reptile and take control of that monster.You can only activate 1 "Sacred Serpents of the Snake Deity" per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solarice04 Posted March 26, 2019 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2019 Here are some more cards. Tell me what you think. Also, I'd like some opinions: Looking at both these cards and the previous ones, am I making these cards too powerful for their cost? or are they fairly well balanced all around? Are there any I should errata? Please let me know. Monsters------------ Stheno of the Snake DeityLevel 5 Dark Reptile/EffectIf you control a "Venom Swamp", this card cannot be destroyed or banished by card effects. This card gains effects based on the number of Venom Counters on it. ● 2 or more: This card cannot be targeted by card effects. ● 3 or more: If this card battles a monster, remove all Venom Counters from this card and add a number of Venom Counters equal to the amount removed to the other monster. You do not take battle damage when this effect activates.0/2200----- Venom AxemasterLevel 5 Dark Reptile/EffectIf this card battles a monster, increase this monster's ATK by 100 for every 2 Venom Counters on the field. If you control a "Venom" or "Snake Deity" monster, you may Special summon this card from your hand.2200/1400----- Traps-------Venom CurseTrapSend Reptile monsters from your hand or field (Max:3) to the graveyard. Activate the following effects depending on the number of monsters sent to the graveyard for this effect: ● 1 or more: Target 1 monster on the field that has 1 or more Venom Counters on it; that monster loses 200 ATK for every Venom Counter on the field. ● 2 or more: Negate the effects of all monsters on the field with a Venom Counter that are not Reptiles until the End phase. ● 3: If the effect of a card that your opponent controls would activate, your opponent must discard 1 card from their hand until the end phase.You may only activate 1 'Venom Curse ' card per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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