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Hello! Since I really liked ben 10 I'm planning on creating ben 10 inspired cards on Yu-Gi-Oh! named as "Omnitrix" cards. Let me explain the concept quickly : The objective is to have a very versatile deck, a deck which can adapt on the most situations as possible. And the deck is based on a field spell card named "Omnitrix Portal" and, of course, a very long list of monsters. These monsters can reveal their true powers only if there is only one monster on your field. With the help of omnitrix portal, you can add the monster from your deck to your hand, so you can adapt your strategy easily. 
 
Since english is not my main language, I may had some mistakes in the description of the cards, I'm sorry about that. Let me know your thoughts about this archetype and the first cards I'm gonna show you! ^^
 
 

Omnitrix Portal (Field Spell card)


Ben Tennyson, Owner of the Omnitrix

 EARTH / lvl 1 / ATK 300 / DEF 300
[Warrior / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - Wildmutt

 EARTH / lvl 4 / ATK/1700 / DEF 1300
[Beast / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - Fourarms

 EARTH / lvl 6 / ATK 2200 / DEF 1800
[Beast-Warrior / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - Grey Matter

 EARTH / lvl 2 / ATK 200 / DEF 200
[Reptile / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - XLR8

 WIND / lvl 4 / ATK 1600 / DEF 700
[Dinosaur / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - Upgrade

 LIGHT / lvl 3 / ATK 900 / DEF 1300
[Cyberse / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - Diamondhead

 LIGHT / lvl 8 / ATK 2800 / DEF 2500
[Rock / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - Ripjaw

 WATER / lvl 3 / ATK 1200 / DEF 1300
[Fish / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - Stinkfly

WIND / lvl 2 / ATK 700 / DEF 600
[Insect / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - Ghostfreak

DARK / lvl 1 / ATK 0 / DEF 0
[Fiend / Effect]

Omnitrix - Heatblast

 FIRE / lvl 4 / ATK 1800 / DEF 1100
[Pyro / Effect]
 
Omnitrix - Cannonbolt

 EARTH / lvl 7 / ATK 1100 / DEF 2700
[Beast / Effect]

 

Omnitrix -Wildvine

EARTH / lvl 3 / ATK 1500 / DEF 1300

[Plant / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Blitzwolfer

DARK / lvl 5 / ATK 1800 / DEF 1700

[Beast / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Snare-Oh

DARK / lvl 3 / ATK 1000 / DEF 1000

[Zombie / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Frankenstrike

DARK / lvl 6 / ATK 2000 / DEF 2000

[Thunder / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Ditto

EARTH / lvl 1 / ATK 100 / DEF 100

[Warrior / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Upchuck

EARTH / lvl 3 / ATK 400 / DEF 1600

[Reptile / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Way Big

LIGHT / lvl 9 / ATK 3000 / DEF 2900

[Warrior / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Eye Guy

DARK / lvl 5 / ATK 2100 / DEF 900 

[Beast-Warrior / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Regenerator

FIRE / lvl 4 / ATK 1800 / DEF 1100

[Plant / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Echo Echo

EARTH / lvl 3 / ATK 1100 / DEF 800

[Machine / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Humungousaur

EARTH / lvl 6 / ATK 2000 / DEF 2000

[Dinosaur / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Jetray

WIND / lvl 3 / ATK 1200 / DEF 300

[Winged-Beast / Effect]

 

Omnitrix - Big Chill

WATER / lvl 5 / ATK 800 / DEF 0

[Winged-Beast / Effect]

 

Omnitrix Counter Attack (Spell)

 

Omnitrix's Will (Quick Spell)

 

Omnitrix Lotto (Spell)

 

Omnitrix Equalizer ( Continuous Trap)



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Before I give you my honest critique on your Archetype, are there any Extra Deck monsters for this Archetype. And if there are, what types of Extra Deck monsters would you have?



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@Guduss there will be some Xyz monsters yes. Like in "Ben 10 Ultimate Alien" ben uses his normal transformations to upgrade them and transform into a better version, there will be some Xyz monsters that will use the normal version and another condition to be summoned. But less than 10, compared to the number of normal monsters, it's nothing.

 

If you want to know excatly how they will have to be summoned, you will need 2 things.

1) You need the card "Ultimatrix Portal" to be on the field. It is a continuous spell card that can be only activated if "Omnitrix Portal" is on the field.

2) You need the "normal version" of the monster on your field. For example, if I have "Ultimatrix Portal" and "Omnitrix - Wildmutt" on my field, I can use Wildmutt to Xyz summon "Omnitrix - Ultimate Wildmutt".

 

I also updated the post with new monsters if you want to check them out too.



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Here's my thoughts on your cards:

1. Omnitrix Portal - Instead of having the effect being that the card is unaffected, why not have the card effect that your monsters are unaffected as long as there is an "Omnitrix" monster on the field? Also if you add an effect that allows you Special Summon an "Omnitrix" monster from your Deck that is a different Level than an "Omnitrix" monster on the field, I think this card can increase the playing field.
2. Omnitrix - Wildmutt - Good effect as it is and its Type matches perfectly with the original alien.
3. Omnitrix - Fourarms - You could change its effect where it can attack all opponent's monsters once per turn.
4. Omnitrix - Grey Matter - Good as it is but change to where when the monster is destroyed and this monster is returned to your field, make it gain the ATK that monster lost and its effect(s), if it had any.
5. Omnitrix - XLR8 - Good as it is.
6. Omnitrix - Upgrade - The monster itself is incredibly, with its effects and everything. But what about an Extra Deck strategy that is kinda like how "Masked Hero" monsters are Summoned from the Extra Deck? The monster that is Summoned from this monster and the monster that is equipped to it is Upgrade but with the Attribute of the equipped monster. Kinda similar to the "Shadoll" Fusion monsters. Just Tribute Upgrade while it has a monster equipped to it and, boom!, Fusion monster on the field.
7. Omnitrix - Diamondhead - Good
8. Omnitrix - Ripjaw - I would take out the last effect and increase the DEF by 200 to 700.

These are just suggestions for how you can make this archetype even more powerful. Also, last suggestion, make Alien X a Link monster.

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Thank you for your reviews! 

 

 

 

1. Omnitrix Portal - Instead of having the effect being that the card is unaffected, why not have the card effect that your monsters are unaffected as long as there is an "Omnitrix" monster on the field? Also if you add an effect that allows you Special Summon an "Omnitrix" monster from your Deck that is a different Level than an "Omnitrix" monster on the field, I think this card can increase the playing field.

I did put this effect for Omnitrix Portal instead of the Omnitrix monsters because this card is really important for the archetype, and some of the Omnitrix monsters can protect themselves. I thought of the idea of Special Summon from the deck too, but I thought it might be a little broken. Also in "Ben 10" even if the Omnitrix has like millions of different aliens registered, he can only use a few of them with "prepared lists" of 10 aliens. I wanted to illustrate it : the deck is the full list, and the hand is the accessible list. But I didn't throw the idea of Special Summon from the deck, actually I prepared a monster who can do it.

 

 

 

3. Omnitrix - Fourarms - You could change its effect where it can attack all opponent's monsters once per turn. 

That was the original idea, but I prepared a monster with the same effect, and since I think it suits the other monster better, I changed Fouramrs's effect.

 

 

 

4. Omnitrix - Grey Matter - Good as it is but change to where when the monster is destroyed and this monster is returned to your field, make it gain the ATK that monster lost and its effect(s), if it had any.

I don't really like the ATK bonus part but I think the effect gain might be good, I'll think about it.

 

 

 

6. Omnitrix - Upgrade - What about an Extra Deck strategy that is kinda like how "Masked Hero" monsters are Summoned from the Extra Deck? The monster that is Summoned from this monster and the monster that is equipped to it is Upgrade but with the Attribute of the equipped monster.

I like this idea of Fusion monster! Actually I thought about something like this it first, but quickly changed my mind, but I think it could be great to think about it again.

 

 

 

8. Omnitrix - Ripjaw - I would take out the last effect and increase the DEF by 200 to 700.

I thought Ripjaw's effects needed a counterpart but maybe it isn't powerfull enough to make one, I don't know. 

 

 

I'm planning on add at least 13 more monsters during the next week! If someone knows how to do the "Hide/Show" thing I saw in some of others's posts, I would like to see it so I can avoid  this topic to become the "scroll master" topic.



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New Update with 5 new monsters : Stinkly, Ghostfreak, Heatblast, Cannonbolt, and Ben Tennyson.



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I really don't have much to say about the new cards. Just to say, they match pretty well to the TV show. Although, I have to say that some monster's ATK are pretty low as well as the DEF. But I guess you're having as support of a Deck that is not entirely "Omnitrix" monsters.



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Update 3 : I added 3 new monsters (Wildvine, Blitzwolfer, and Snare-Oh) as well as 2 spell cards and 1 trap card.



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Update 4 : Added 5 new monsters : Frankenstrike, Ditto, Upchuck, Way Big, and Eye Guy. Tell me your thoughts about these new monsters ! ^^



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Here's my thoughts from the previous update and this new one:

 

1.  Wildvine: Add an effect that targets towards Plant-type monsters, because if you remember correctly from the show, he also could meld with surrounding flora.

2. Blitzwolfer: No comment.

3. Snare-oh: No comment.

4. Omnitrix Counter Attack: You should change its effects to those that could be based for Way Big's counters.

5. Omnitrix Fury: You should change the name to "Omnitrix Defense".

6. Omnitrix Equalizer: No comment.

7. Frankenstrike: No comment.

8. Ditto: You should change the last effect to "If this card were to be destroyed by battle or card effect, Tribute a "Ditto Token" instead.

9. Upchuck: What type of monster is Upchuck? Main or Extra Deck? If Main, Upchuck is not a Xyz monster. Only Xyz monsters get Xyz materials. Monsters in the Main Deck get "equipment" monsters, kind of like Dragunity monsters. If Extra, then make it an Xyz monster.

10. Way Big: No comments.

11. Eye Guy: What do you mean, adjacent cards? Do you mean by rows or columns? You can't say "adjacent" because even if most people know the game, there is always that one retard who is confused about what does the card mean by adjacent. Adjacent means next to, which could mean in all directions like a Link monster.



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@Guduss thank you for the review!

 

 

 

Wildvine: Add an effect that targets towards Plant-type monsters

I'll think of one. Maybe something like taking control of the plant-type monsters ? 

 

 

 

Omnitrix Counter Attack: You should change its effects to those that could be based for Way Big's counters.

I was planning for a card which can quickly help and save the situation, I'm affraid that if I make an effect based on counters, it would take too much time to be effective. Or maybe that is not what you meant at all and I didn't understand.

 

 

 

Omnitrix Fury: You should change the name to "Omnitrix Defense".

Since this card can be used when an Omnitrix monster both attacks or is attacked, I don't know if "Defense" is an appropriate name. Maybe "Omnitrix's Will" ?

 

 

 

Ditto: You should change the last effect to "If this card were to be destroyed by battle or card effect, Tribute a "Ditto Token" instead.

Maybe I didn't explain it well enough in the effect, but it's actually the effect of the Ditto Token and not Ditto himself. That means if a Ditto token is destroyed, all the Ditto tokens are destroyed with it, but the original Ditto is safe. 

 

 

 

Upchuck: What type of monster is Upchuck? Main or Extra Deck?

Main Deck. Honestly I searched cards that could possibly do this effect to see if it was possible. I didn't want to use the "equipment" strategy because there would be too many cards to equip. The only way I can see a "Normal" monster getting an Xyz material is maybe by the effect of a monster like "The Tyrant Neptune" or "Phantom of Chaos". And I tought it could bring something new to let it like this. But I think I will change the effect of "Upchuck" because I don't think it really matches the alien like I wanted.

 

 

 

Eye Guy: What do you mean, adjacent cards? Do you mean by rows or columns?

I mean both. I could have write "To the right, left, top, and bottom of the targeted card" but it's way too long so I wrote "adjacent".



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Update 5 : Added 3 new monsters : Regenerator, Echo Echo, and Humungousaur. I also changed the effect of Upchuck since the last version wasn't really appropriate.



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1. Upchuck (Revised): The effect doesn't seem to make sense with the monster you're trying to base-off from the show. Upchuck would be a better monster as an Extra Deck, due to gorging energy can be seen as Xyz materials, kinda like Cyber Dragon Infinity.

2. Regenerator: No comment. Perfect as it is.

3. Echo Echo: I would simplify the last effect as just "this card can not change battle position."

4. Humongosaur: I would make it a Lv 8. Include an effect that makes it unable to be destroyed by battle.

 

Have you considered doing the Ultimate forms? You can make it like the "/Assault Mode" monsters.



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@Guduss thanks for the reply!

 

1. It's kind of hard to do an effect that really matches Upchuck without making him an Extra deck monster. This is something I really wanted when I imagined this archetype : no "normal" Omnitrix monster in the Extra Deck. I agree that an effect like Cyber Dragon Infinity would match well with him, and it was the same mechanic for the previous version of Upchuck, I thought that even if he is not an Xyz monster, the absorbtion of some cards wouldn't be a problem. So maybe I will work again on his effect but one thing is sure : I don't want him to be an Extra Deck monster.

 

3. I changed it, I agree it's a little more clear.

4. Humungosaur is one of the monster I was the less inspired, I will maybe add your ideas to his effect. But the strategy of being unable to be destroyed according to the level is also an idea I put in another Omnitrix monster that will came in the future.

 

And finally, yes Ultimate forms will come, and they will be in the Extra Deck. In fact I have already some of them completely ready (like Ultimate Regenerator or Ultimate Wildmutt) but I'll add all the aliens of the "Alien Force" series before so please just wait a little more for them ^^



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Update 6  :

. Added 2 monsters : Jetray and Big Chill

. Added 1 new spell card : Omnitrix Lotto

. Slightly changed the effect of Echo Echo as I wasn't satisfied with it

. Added an effect to Humungousaur that allows him to not be destroyed in a certain way.



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1. Jetray - No comment.

2. Big Chill - No comment.

3. Omnitrix Lotto - Shouldn't the effect be 10 "Omnitrix" monsters instead of 6? And instead of dice, a random guess by shuffliing the ten monsters and letting you to chose one? Just a suggestion if you want to be somewhat faithful to the show.

4. Echo Echo (revised) - Definitely makes sense and is now better. 

5. Humungousaur (revised) - No comment.






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