Elemental HERO Mothman + Elemental HERO Flying Death Moth

[Zeddle]

Elemental HERO Mothman:

 

https://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Elemental+HERO+Mothman&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=5&rarity=Common&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FeCWuwZ3.jpg&circulation=&set1=&set2=&type=Insect&carddescription=If+you+have+4+or+more+Insect-Type+Monsters+or+%22Elemental+HERO%22+Monsters+in+your+Graveyard%3A+You+can+banish+4+Insect-Type+or+%22Elemental+HERO%22+Monsters%3A+Add+2+%22Elemental+HERO%22+or+Polymerization+Cards+from+the+Deck+to+your+Hand.+%0D%0A&atk=2300&def=700&creator=Zeddle&year=2019&serial=

 

Elemental HERO Flying Death Moth:

 

https://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Elemental+HERO+Flying+Death+Moth&cardtype=Fusion&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=9&rarity=Common&picture=https%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FvxbN5Ft.png&circulation=&set1=&set2=&type=Insect&carddescription=Elemental+HERO+Mothman+%2B+Elemental+HERO+Flame+Wingman%0D%0AThis+card+is+unaffected+by+your+opponents+card+effects.+This+card+gets+150+ATK+for+each+banished+monster.+Once+per+turn+during+the+main+Phase%3A+You+can+banish+3+%22Elemental+Hero%22+Monsters+from+your+GY%3A+Special+Summon+a+banished+Monster.+When+this+card+destroys+a+monster+by+battle+and+sends+it+to+the+Graveyard%3A+Inflict+damage+to+your+opponent+equal+to+the+ATK+of+the+destroyed+monster+in+the+Graveyard.&atk=2800&def=1900&creator=Zeddle&year=2019&serial=

 

Artworkes by KrysFun. https://www.deviantart.com/krysfun

 

I would appreciate feedback. <3

[Tinkerer]

Elemental HERO Mothman

EARTH *****

Insect/Effect

If you have 4+ Insect monsters or "Elemental HERO" monsters in your GY, you can banish 4 Insect monsters or "Elemental HERO" monsters from your GY; add 2 "Elemental HERO" or "Polymerization" cards from your Deck to your hand.

2300/700

 

Elemental HERO Flying Des Moth

EARTH 9*

Insect/Fusion/Effect

"Elemental HERO Mothman" + "Elemental HERO Flame Wingman"

This card is unaffected by your opponent's card effects. This card gains 150 ATK for each banished monster. Once per turn: You can banish 3 "Elemental HERO" monsters from your GY; Special Summon 1 banished monster. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the GY: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster in the GY.

2800/1900

 

Just put the cards on here in written form (and updated most of the text to modern form) so it's easier to see.

 

The second card seems fine. The card is pretty difficult to summon, so the fact it has 2800 base ATK and is immune to opponent stuff is a bit much, but still somewhat reasonable. The only thing I'd suggest is putting a hard once per turn on the banish Special Summon effect.

 

The first card feels pretty weak though. It is already level 5 so it's not easy to summon, 4 monsters in grave is a steep cost (especially in HEROs), and searching for E-HEROs is redundant because E-HEROs already have tons of search potential. Being able to search Super Polymerization might be worth it, but the first two conditions make it just too difficult. Honestly, if it banished 2 "HEROs" (not just Elemental HEROs) and searched 1 card, it could be worth it.

 

Cheers!

[Zeddle]

Thanks man!

I try my best to improve this Cards espacially the first.

Btw, sry for my bad English