So this is interesting, I defo see a change of style that you're attempting, currently, the lighting looks nowhere near strong enough to make it actually work
It just sorta stops, like there isn't and doesn't light anything up.
The out of focus/pixelation effect hasn't been done too great here-as such it leaves me with the thought that this could be great but I'm just kinda shrugging at it.
It's very busy with next to no logical progression, I think it would look better in focus or more pixelated, right now it's sat in limbo.
Okay, how's this look?
I applied stronger lighting from the hammer and increased the blur radius on the c4d around him. From that, I think it looks much better, but let me know what you think.