Beautiful. I am absolutely in love with your prose.
It's like a dessert of which I can't get enough. It's light, acutely sweet, simplistic, and overall pleasing to the eye. I felt content throughout the reading, allow me to give an example:
"She seemed quite amused at the foreigner's blunder before her expression turned apologetic."
There's something so sweet about the narration here, it tells you so much about this girl in such a lithe way, but reveals a solf, calming tone that really permeates throughout the whole piece.
I do have one small comment. This story has a great amount of thematic potential (this could blow up into a full-on discourse on humanity and mortality), and I think you should write keeping that in mind. It might give a stronger life to the story, or maybe give you a stronger will to continue.
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